Emptyness

I have no life and I feel no pain.
I’m numb.
I’m not real.
I’m my only friend.
Nobody cares
Nobody fights
But the world’s so numb.
So uncaring.
So sad.
No life.
No wheel to turn.
No way to feel pain without the life I lost.
The life I lost because of you.

Author's Note

Just another poem.

Reviews

[Reaverblade]

The piece is more prose than poem. I agree with Legion. You should dig deeper, really bare yourself in the poem to write.

[Legion]

Dig deeper. I want the anguish to consume me as well. Not a bad write, but could be better.