Who I am

Who I am

A Poem by Every1s_psychotic_vampyre_friend

Ice cold stare,
Yet flaming eyes,
Soul of darkness,
Pain inside.

Blackened heart,
Angered mood,
Evil spirit,
In Devil’s shoes.

Hope destroyed,
Faith no more,
Destiny shattered,
Life a void.

Nights are endless,
The thirst grows,
Life is pointless,
Craving for gore.

Innocent blood,
The search begins,
The taste of flesh,
Hate within.

 

Life in shadows,
Never seen,
Striking swiftly,
Senses keen.

Eternity alone,
Love is a tale,
Dreams don’t exist,
Hope is a fable.

Death in mind,
Suffering huge,
Nothing to gain,
Nothing to lose.

Maybe psychotic,
Probably deranged,
Mostly disturbed,
Poisoned brain.

Future a blur,
Time will tell,
Eternity on earth,
Forever in hell.

 

© 2008 Every1s_psychotic_vampyre_friend


Author's Note

Every1s_psychotic_vampyre_friend
First good poem. ^-^

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I like this dark feel you have, it seemed alittle forced at times but all in all it's good, i like the feel and the flow of it...

"Maybe psychotic,
Probably deranged,
Mostly disturbed,
Poisoned brain." This was my favorite stanza in the poem... so much said! this is really good... Great Job!


Posted 16 Years Ago


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This is my favorite poem of yours cus. lol

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Darkly it goes like a stalking cat on nimble toes. Well written. I like.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Nice poem. I like how you explain yourself in a dark way and are free to express it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Hey my names Amber. I live in a small boring town in New York. Not New York city.. Just New York.. Anyways. Im a rocker girl. =] So I go see a lot of concerts and I happen to write in my free time. T.. more..

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