The Other Side

The Other Side

 

 

The darkness has stolen you.

It has swallowed you,

It has spit you out.

So now, you just lie on its wings

Falling through so many times,

Into a world unknown to me.

I don’t know where it is,

So I can’t get you out.

 

I thought you had dreams.

Dreams that you cherished.

But time is running out,

And you’re stuck over their,

Up their,

Down their

I don’t know.

I really don’t know,

How can I get you away.

Pull you from that veil of static evil.

 

Dewdrops of sorrow,

Have drowned my lashes,

And I’m sorry,

But I don’t know…

 

Reviews

[Ian]

Wow!
I love this! I like it a lot!
I love the way you wrote the whole piece, it�s just perfect... so well written
You wouldn�t believe how much I relate to this... You caught me
Applauses for you! Wonderful poem!

[LittleGlassWings]

Awesome. i like the "I thought you had dreams' I feel that way a lot about some people. :P