The "Dream"

I once had a dream I was in Halo 3. I was so scared. I P'zoned everyone. I had a gun in my hand. An Assult rifle. I watched the people faint and die right before my feet. I had taken innocent lives of others. It wasn't really a dream. More like a nightmare. Then a shot was fired. I ducked. Then everything was quiet. I ran for my life. Then I woke up. I was in my warm bed. Light was shining in from the window. The fireplace was well lit. I was so happy to know that it was just a dream.

Author's Note

I know its not very good but i want to know... should i enter it in this contest where you tell about a dream you've had.

Reviews

[AmeliaRose]

aw, that must be such a bad dream!!! seriously, having a gun in your grip, runs shivers down my spine! and it's sad, i can relate to feeling sad about thsoe people. great though- i personally like people who write like this. it leaves space for my imagination to fill in places, so your story doesn't need 10 pages of nonsense- just the point.

[Alyssa]

that must be a cool dream. oh dont listen to me. im the complete oppisite of you jessica. having a gun in my grip and an Assult riffle sounds cool to me! but this was very good jess.

[Lizzy]

i understand how you would feel the pain because you caused pain in others, i think this is a great piece... althoug you have to read all of it before you understand the maening it is GREAT!!! i think that this is a wonderful piece and that you worded it beautifully!!!

[K. Carver]

at the beginning i can see the despair and the fright....but towards the end you kinda lost me....it was like you just quit and it was like you were speed writing without thinking....over all i liked it...