The "Dream"

I once had a dream I was in Halo 3. I was so scared. I P'zoned everyone. I had a gun in my hand. An Assult rifle. I watched the people faint and die right before my feet. I had taken innocent lives of others. It wasn't really a dream. More like a nightmare. Then a shot was fired. I ducked. Then everything was quiet. I ran for my life. Then I woke up. I was in my warm bed. Light was shining in from the window. The fireplace was well lit. I was so happy to know that it was just a dream.

Author's Note

I know its not very good but i want to know... should i enter it in this contest where you tell about a dream you've had.

Reviews

[Bethany]

awww!! I would have LOVED to live inside Halo 3! You could enter the contest if you make it more..... specific. Like. Instead of "I once had a dream I was in Halo 3. I was so scared." Try, "Sometime ago, in the dead of night, an image crept into my ear and made a nest in my head. I was suddenly standing in a bloody battlefield. Loud, unfamiliar noises raged around me and screams echoed off the canyon walls. I was terrified. I was filled with a sense of doom. Would I ever see my family again? I was scared and I wanted to go home and awake from this nightmare."

(I'm more of a story writer, not a journalist.)

[Scyoni]

It's a nice attempt, although I do agree with Bethany about the lack of details. If you want, you can enter a contest. Worst that can happen is you don't win, right? You can only make the goal if you take the shot, and if you miss? Well... you aren't exactly playing Russian roulette.

So, in future stories just attempt a bit more detail. Good luck with your contests.

[The Spaniard]

of course you should enter it. Don't ever sell yourself short.