When I grow up

Whe the child days are done
And everything is a little less fun
I will persure my dream
Probably not as easy as it will seem
My dream is to write
My works will show my enemys spite.
The will insprire, and create
Places of wonder, where everyone can relate.
People will love my books
They will read them and look,
At the wonderful fantasies
That my words will show them.
This is my dream
Probably not a simple as is seems.

Reviews

[Lauren Marie]

"This is my dream
Probably not a simple as i[t] seems."

Ahh This is so true! The actual writing part, I think, is hard enough, especially with longer stories. But then the publishing world is a nightmare. Don't let it eat you alive, and don't EVER give up!

Now for the actual poem, I liked it. It has a good message, and one that everyone on here can relate to. There were some spelling errors; Microsoft word has become my best friend with that.

This was a lovely little poem. Good job, and good luck!
~Lauren

[Coffee Vampier]

love the thought and bulk of the idea of your dream put into a short poem, lovely write :)

[Daydreamer54]

I really like this. it was cute and straight to the point. I'm preety sure you are on ur way to acheive ur goal of being a writer. Afterall your'e poating ur work, so i guess that's a start. :)

[BeautifulDisaster]

i like this a lot. its very realistic and i like the message. its positive because you can see yourself pursuing this dream and doing it and i like that positivity.

and ya it will be a challenge getting to live the dream but in my opinion it is worth it in the end.
good job and keep up the great work. :)

[Little Amy Lee]

This is beautiful.
=]

[Expression]

I like it very much :')

[Jennifer Marie Theresa ..]

A dream that if you put your soul into will come true, i love this =]

[Cassandra D.]

This is very simple and very good.
And...Very Creative! I like this poem!
It reminds me of...me...lol.
Well, this was soo awesome!

[Cคɾเ&#..]

Very simple, but it speaks, if that makes any sence. This my dream too, and I look forward to seeing your stuff on bookshelfs beside mine :)

[Marisa!(:]

This is great! All I can say is follow you're your dream! Awesome motivation.