Doubts
A Poem by
~Shadow Kissed~
They prowl around
Not making a sound
To find a bite
Their food for the night
The fears you know
Feed them as they grow
You don't have a clue
As they continue to chew
Right through your soul.
© 2009 ~Shadow Kissed~
Reviews
short, sweet, and to the point.! i loved every line! great write!
Posted 14 Years Ago
For very little words, this poem actually amazes me.
This is very awesome :)
Posted 15 Years Ago
For very little words, this poem actually amazes me.
This is very awesome :)
This ones great for thinking. Awesome write! I can't wait to read more! :)
thanks for the review. :)
Posted 15 Years Ago
This ones great for thinking. Awesome write! I can't wait to read more! :)
thanks for the review. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This poem is great. It demonstrates how certain feelings can eat away at your mind and as you said your soul. It's simple yet powerful.
Posted 15 Years Ago
This poem is great. It demonstrates how certain feelings can eat away at your mind and as you said your soul. It's simple yet powerful.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Amazing!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Amazing!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I liked this one.:]
Also, I'd like to thank you for the comment.:]
Posted 15 Years Ago
I liked this one.:]
Also, I'd like to thank you for the comment.:]
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on August 10, 2009
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~Shadow Kissed~ Waverly, TN
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My name is Amber. I'm now 16 and ready to take on the world. I'm an avid reader and a bad speller so forgive me. I spend my time with a book in my hand dictonary beside me, and pen and paper within re..
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