End It

he holds my heart

i want it back

the pain he causes

makes me mad

how can i let him go

when in my heart i love him so?

Reviews

[Melissa Rose]

when you finally let go and walk away, you will see how much stronger you are without him. trust me, i know. this is short and simple, very fitting for the subject.

[Jennifer Marie Theresa ..]

Simple yet goes straight towards the essence of heartache. I really liked this piece!

[Andrew'sWonderland]

Short, but yet filled with the emotional struggles of relationships. Great interpretation of a life experience! Keep up the Good Work!!!