Frost

The Frost's bite

Accompanys the night

Cold and scary

It does not tarry

Hunker down until the morning

When the sun comes

Away he runs

Again it happens every night

Hope you can hold out until the Light

Reviews

[Nicole E. Belle]

Very cute and fitting of frost! I love "when the sun comes/away he runs." One suggestion - the last line doesn't flow quite as well because the rhythm is just slightly off. Perhaps change it to "Hope you hold out til the light" or even "Can you hold out til the light?" just to make it fit with the previous line. Overall, good job!

[Andrew'sWonderland]

Chilling!! Frost definitely has the power to freeze as you read on through the poem! I really like your choice of adjectives for the imagery becames real. Great Work!!