Storm

the wind blew

the clouds darkened

lightening lit the sky.

while all alone

the girl sat watching.

this was the chaos of her mind.

Reviews

[Andrew'sWonderland]

Short, Simple, Sweet, and to the Point! I am quite fond of your poem and can even relate in a way: Ideas and Thoughts clash through my mind just as the lightening might pierce the sky. The end result is always the same in the sense that it is all the chaos within myself. Beautiful poem!!! I truly cannot wait to read some more of you work!

[Rima]

nice, short and simple. It flowed well and I like how you showed the storm was like her mind- great job

[GYPSYLEAH]

Hi Amber - Very good, creating a visual was easily done as I read your work.

[A]

I like how you compared a storm to they way she feels inside. I really like the imagery you used in the beginning. The way you described the storm allows me to picture it perfectly. :) Great poem!