The Hope I Have Left

Author's Note

I hope this doesn't go over people's heads :/

Reviews

[Black Jess]

This is coooool xD
I thought it was my intrnet that is slow ( cause it is ) I was waiting for something till I realized that this is actually a blank page xD
Sometimes the absence of words can bring a smile, like Mrs been, he makes us laugh by saying nothing xD
Clever !

[Nisreen]

That's clever
Really clever

[Darian B.]

Thanks Serendipity :)

[Neal S]

It must be late!! I refreshed the page a couple times thinking something was wrong!! LOL...You've done it Sir..You won..Drop mic go home!!

[Darian B.]

Cant take all the credit, the inspiration came from William Liston, but thank you :D Sometimes a little bit of comic relief in painful truths goes a long way

[Neal S]

Indeed it does..My first thought was hmm that's an interesting title. Then once I realized the meaning I couldn't help but just burst into laughter..Thanks for this.

[Lorry]

Bloody genius. Honestly brilliant. Wish I had thought of that. As stark as it is raw, as well as making me feel like a proper twonk reviewing nothing, but you have somehow managed to turn a negative into a positive with such a brainwave. I can't wait to try and describe this to others :)

[Darian B.]

Haha, thank you Nemo Im glad you enjoyed it :) I actually got the idea for this kind of poem from some poems William Liston made awhile ago and I always wanted to make one. I was just waiting for something original yet true to come to my mind and here it is :)

[Lorry]

Well, it must be catching, because it gave me an idea too. I'll let you know when it comes to fruition :)

[Darian B.]

Cool! Send me an RR when it does :D