life

definitions of life maybe many but message is one..

life is journey..
so travel is mandatory
life is a story
so lessons are not history
life is a song
lyrics u need is mistry
Life is a candy
Sweet as victory
Life is a dance
hip hop and contemporary
Life is politics
Always contradictory
Bt life is a message valedictory..

Author's Note

dear all.. m just a beginner need help support of you all with your advice looking forward for the same..hope you ignore my flaws but do advice me..

Reviews

[Rishi Agarwal]

amazing lines dear :*. you can do very well in the field of literature. carry on your good work. ;)

[shachi]

thanks you liked it..!! :) @ lnked_memory

[Inked_Memory]

Loved it. I would appreciate a review on my poem and tips of improvement please. :)

[shachi]

yes..it was mystery.. and thank you for your support nd review..

[vspjaguar]

A thoughtful poem, nice one. In line number 6, you mean to say mystery?