Curious

Only some truely care,the rest are just curious.

I smile and shine.

What they don't know is whats inside.

But do they want to, is the thing.

Can't they see I'm hanging by a string?

It's different when they're nosey.

And different when they truley care.

I  stand near screaming

For what, not sure, I despair.

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad, but I think it's a little too brief - there's definitely room to expand. And yes, while brevity is the soul of wit, I still there's unanswered questions in this piece, and it's all a little unclear.