Over and Over

Over and Over

A Poem by Oh Wow, Lovely.

It's a sad process
But knowing in the end
You'll help them
There's not a better feeling

Then it's when they stay for a long time
Then "poof"
They're gone
Never seen again

They come and go
Come and go
Come and go
You get attached

So attached 
It hurts 
It happens Over and Over
Its like life 
A cycle 
They come, You get attached
They leave with a single good-bye. 
I'd say the worst part of it all
Is the leaving
You have to act happy
Like nothings happening
Or they cry
Then the last you see them they're crying 

Some times they're put up for foster care or adoption
Because they have abilities

I got this kid
Kaleb
He had Cystic Fibrosis
A day and you'd fall in love with him
Big baby blue eyes
Light brown hair
He was an angel

He left without a warning 
I didn't get a proper good-bye

© 2012 Oh Wow, Lovely.


Author's Note

Oh Wow, Lovely.
If you don't know what his disease was; it's a passed down disease, his parents had it. You have mucus in your lungs and you can't get it fully out. The life span for him and a lot of effected patients is 20 years old. So to help you understand his case think of it like this metaphor. Like a cat ,only 20 years, If you treated wrong for so long you lose lives.That's what happened to him. His parents didn't treat him right so when we got him he had lost around 6 lives. So he's gonna be like a teenager when he dies. And i'll never get to see him again. He moved away.

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Awe :( This broke my heart. It was already a sad poem, but that ending. Jeesh, what a way to start my morning.

This was very good. I like how you brought up the fact of when some of them leave crying then that's the last image you have of them. :(

Wonderful poem though. Well written and evoked strong emotion in the reader.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh Wow, Lovely.

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much that means a lot! :)



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Awe :( This broke my heart. It was already a sad poem, but that ending. Jeesh, what a way to start my morning.

This was very good. I like how you brought up the fact of when some of them leave crying then that's the last image you have of them. :(

Wonderful poem though. Well written and evoked strong emotion in the reader.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh Wow, Lovely.

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much that means a lot! :)

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Oh Wow, Lovely.

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~~I don't know why I am the way I am. Something makes me hate everything. Light up, Smoke up, Shut the F**k Up.I'm officially off the rails, you should try it. A little more of her is gone, I can see .. more..

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A Poem by Oh Wow, Lovely.