The Dead Pond

A little girl

Lived a normal night

Bright bouncy ponytails

Everything was all right

She loved to play castle

Act like a princess

No slaves

She thought it was fantastic

"Badadadahhh here comes the princess" 

She says making her way

With a white blowing dress

Flying in the wind

A day never went by 

Where she wasn't pretending

She was a quiet kid

Kept to herself

Which was regretted

She went to play house

One day

Down by the pond, you say

She had fallen in

Not knowing how it was like to swim

Drowning

Down

She went

All the way to the bottom

She had left us with a smile upon her face

She was known for being

Generous

Brave

She always thought it would be okay 

Reviews

[Damien Davison]

Poor girl, made me feel bad. I connected to it, nice write.

[Oh Wow, Lovely.]

Thank you :)

[Craba]

such a deep write, so emotional. Well expressed

[Oh Wow, Lovely.]

Thanks :)

[That_Girl]

Deep and dark. Love it!

[Oh Wow, Lovely.]

Thank you so much!:)

[lallison88]

:(

[Captivating Ink]

Oh my God. This is really good. Seriously. It is quite deep and refects on how sometimes innocence and death can go hand in hand.