The Girl Who Stayed

A girl

And a guy

Meet everyday

At the same old place

You liked to play chase

As little kids 

You liked to play

The girl spontaneous

The guy mischievous

A perfect match

Forever and ever

Or so they say

Until one day

The girl became 

Worthless

The guy to cool

One flaw and 

Poof 

He's gone

Popularity got to his head

Nothing in reminder

Except the swing in the back

That still swings

The girl still returns

To play once more 

Tears have now stained the floor 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Tearas have now stained the floor..
Nice write...

[lallison88]

Quite emotional, I could picture the story in my head as I read it though. Sounds almost like a song.

[That_Girl]

What a sad poem. Unfortunate when this happens. :/

One quick note:
"The guy to cool" -> 'too'

:)

[Oh Wow, Lovely.]

Okay i always get those mixed up! :)

[That_Girl]

No problem! :)

[That_Guy]

well he's missing out

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Very sad, and yet, not out of the ordinary. One stays with the love, the other moves on with a whisk of a wander...hard to let go, these kind.

[Captivating Ink]

I had no idea that it was you who wrote this until I happened to glance at the author. I am so glad you are learning to portray such raw emotion, friend.

[Oh Wow, Lovely.]

oh thanks friend, such low expectations for me much??

[Captivating Ink]

No, of course not! :) You're just showing me that, even if you do not realize it yet, you really did get the ending of that book.

[Jetta Zippora]

Such a beautiful poem, friend. :) Simple but with a sweet and melancholy message. Great write.

[Oh Wow, Lovely.]

Thank you:)