You Wouldn't Last

You Wouldn't Last

A Poem by Oh Wow, Lovely.
"

you can't last a day in someone else's' shoes.

"
You don't know what it's like
To be someone else
To act like you know
But you don't 

Take a minute
Realize what is happening
Look to your instincts
Find your surroundings 
Find yourself 

© 2012 Oh Wow, Lovely.


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The first stanza sounds a bit like their is an internal conflict happening.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I forgot to rate

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fiind yourself oooooooooo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple, wise words. Great writing, my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh Wow, Lovely.

12 Years Ago

ha ha thanks, my friend :)
Find yourself ... Words of wisdom...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 15, 2012
Last Updated on September 18, 2012

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Oh Wow, Lovely.
Oh Wow, Lovely.

Bristol , United Kingdom



About
~~I don't know why I am the way I am. Something makes me hate everything. Light up, Smoke up, Shut the F**k Up.I'm officially off the rails, you should try it. A little more of her is gone, I can see .. more..

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A Poem by Oh Wow, Lovely.