This is great, but some of the words you used to describe a sunset weren't really true. Serene, unique, natural, scarlet, sure. Elegant, tropical, sophisticated, not so much. Better try next time.
This painted a picture in my mind. However, "tropical" was a risky move and "sophisticated" I don't think is the word for sunsets. Overall a good and simple poem, a nice break from all the complicated, depressing poems on WritersCafe! Thanks for sharing.
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