Pointless Words

Pointless Words

A Poem by Sabrina

Words are words with life

they tell you stories

they tell a life

they tell about love

about romance

about casualties

they tell of life

or of death

of cuddles

or of kisses

yet best of all

they form a picture in our minds

© 2015 Sabrina


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Wonderful! The font is a little strange but things happen.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I agree. Your description of words I liked. Words can make us cry, laugh and remember. We need words, story and song. Keep the mind alive and working. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sabrina

9 Years Ago

Thanks!!!!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Nice and simple poem. The font was a little strange though, so try to use something different next time! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sabrina

9 Years Ago

Thanks! I will try to use a different font next time.
Great poem! Just pointing out one thing, on you last line, it says "The form a picture in our minds" Did you mean they? Great poem though! Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sabrina

9 Years Ago

Yes, I meant they. My keyboard must not have regestered the y.
@juliza

9 Years Ago

haha, ok, other then that little mistake there you did a great job!

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