My sun

You are the sun. 

Look how all the planets orbit around you. 

Look how the stars all bow for you. 

Look how you make the moon shine. 

You make me shine, as if I was the moon. 

Only in your light, I can shine. 

Only you give me the strength to shine. 

I'm in an orbit around you, my sun. 

I cannot get out, even if I wanted to. But I don't. 

It's too nice and warm in your bright light. 

Without you, my own light would die, as if I were the moon. 

I cannot shine without you. 

Author's Note

Bear with my grammar. Opinions appreciated as always

Reviews

[Just Kim]

Awe this is so touching,
I loved this, nicely written