Forever Never Knowing

Forever Never Knowing

A Poem by S.A. Kurzweil
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This poem depicts the critical moments in a relationship between two young friends and lovers. The turbulence of life brought them together and tore them apart. Completed 2012.

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Unspoken is the affection that a young friendship found
As if we were still smoking at a park and our laughter the only sound
Farewell long talks and notions of something better
Memories pass so we'll leave it in a letter

In the midst of misfortune, the yearnings of a mourner
As if we were still talking at the shop on the corner
Farewell puzzles in those sad and lonesome places
Memories pass in the absence of one's graces

The trees gently whisper of budding affection
As if we were still savoring honeysuckle by water's reflection
Farewell three bottles of wine on carefree nights
Memories pass as we turn out the lights

A girl's aching heart heals as the music plays so loud
As if we were still consoling friends in a concert's crowd
Farewell drunken kisses in movie theaters and parked cars
Memories pass as dawn overwhelms the stars

© 2021 S.A. Kurzweil


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beautiful.
love the last line - "memories pass as dawn overwhelms the stars"...to me that speaks of just another day


Posted 3 Years Ago


Your words speak to me "...if only we knew, forever never knowing a path unknown" you brought emotions to life with your words. An excellent job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

S.A. Kurzweil

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm so glad that you liked it.
This feels so real to me, so beautifully written and with care and detail that draws the reader in the feel the words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

S.A. Kurzweil

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words and for my first review. This is perhaps the most cherished poem that .. read more
Cherry Pepperweb

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. I'm glad to have read your poem.

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