My Strange Dream {Chapter 2}

Werid Dream, Edward's worried and Emma tries to help.

Jacob came running over a hill, the same hill that leads to mine and Edward's meadow. He had fear in his eyes... something was chasing him, but what could possibly scare a werewolf? Jake ran right past me as if he didn't notice I was standing there, or maybe he noticed... but didn't care. My breathing was getting heavier, I saw a beautiful women come running after Jake, she had looked like she was also drowned in fear, once again I was unnoticed. I turned around to see where she was going but I felt a hand on my shoulder. I turned around and saw Mike Newton fall face down on the ground with a huge bite mark in his back, and a bloody hand print on my shoulder where he grabbed me. I stepped back trying to get away from poor lifeless mike, but something was holding me there. I looked up and saw Carmella's pale face smiling at me, she grabbed my hair and put her mouth up to my ear. " I'm sorry Bella, this may hurt a bit, but don't take it personally... I'm just thirsty." she said as she moved her mouth to my neck. I felt her tilt my head back. I squeezed my eyes closed and waited for the pain.

" Bella, Bella what's wrong?" Edward called frantically, I shot my eyes open. I looked around and saw I was in my bed, with Edward hovering over me. I felt a cold hand on the left side of my face. I realized it was just a dream, my breathing was fast and I was sweating. Edward's face was pained with worry. I sat up to show him I was OK. " Bella, did you have a nightmare?" He asked, worry still in his eyes. I sighed.
" mmm" I managed to push out between breaths. Edward stroked my hair and started to hum my lullaby, I looked at the alarm clock next to my bed and saw 4:37 a.m. I sighed and looked at Edward, " Hey, ummm... just a thought, you know Carmella would never hurt me... right?"I said still panting. Edward looked at me for a second and realized what had me sweating and panting. His face suddenly went from worry to anger.

" She hasn't given you any reason to fear for your life has she, her thoughts seemed harmless enough to me." He said angrily.

" No... she didn't, it was only a dream.". I said trying to stick up for Carmella, but truthfully I was kinda scared of the dream. Edward sighed and took out his phone. He started to dial and didn't speak for a while.

" Hello, Emma? I need you at Bella's house now! No... don't bring Jasper. Will you come without him anyway?" He paused. " I see, well get Jasper and come to Bella's house now!" he said and hung up the phone. I sat there not even aware that this was such a big deal. Five minuets later I heard a loud thump on my window. Edward went to the window and opened it, Emma came in so gracefully yet somehow was able to keep her hand interlaced with Jasper's. Once the two of them were in my room Emma looked over at Edward then me. Emma sat on the edge of my bed and folded her arms in her lap.

" She looks fine to me, what do you think Jasper?" Emma said in her high bell-like voice.

" Well, she looks a little shaken up... I'll take care of that." Jasper said looking at me then Emma, Emma nodded. After a few moments I felt relaxed and calm. Jasper had changed the mood in the room, I was thankful for that. Emma smiled at Jasper and gave him a quick kiss, her way of telling him 'good job'.

" OK, Bella. What happened?" Emma said calmly looking at me. I was kind of confused.

" Umm... Emma, Jasper, why are you here?". I asked plainly and looked at Edward. He still looked stressed. " This isn't anything more then a nightmare." I added. Emma stood up and walked to my side.

" Bella, I believe that dreams are warnings. Our mind's way of telling us something is going to happen. Sometimes our mind mixes it in a way that it needs to be interpreted, but our dreams always have messages for us... or at least I believe they do." Emma said then sighed, " However, I no longer experience dreams so my theory may be wrong." She sighed again and looked at Edward. " But, I was the main one who trained Carmella, I know her weaknesses... that's why Edward called me. " Emma finished then looked at Jasper. I couldn't make sense of the last part ' I know her weaknesses' they're not going to hurt Carmella are they. I looked at Edward with tears in my eyes.

" Edward... they're not going to hurt her are they? She's my best friend..." I said softly between sobs. Emma shook her head but I paid no attention to her . " Edward, please... it was only a dream! Emma, you know Carmella would never dream of hurting me." I said now directing my sobs at Emma. Emma glared at Edward then looked at me again.

" Of course we would never hurt her." Emma said half smiling at me. " Edward is making a big deal of this. I think you just had a dream, you'll be fine. as for you Edward, calm yourself down. God forbid your darling Bella gets a little shaken up." Emma said grinning at Edward, then i heard Jasper chuckle in the background.

" Edward, I could bring Carmella and Emmett over here and we could talk this over." Jasper told Edward then stood up and walked to Emma's side and put his arms around her waist. " I'm sure they wouldn't mind." he added. Edward looked over at me as if to make sure it was OK with me. He gave one swift nod and sat next to me on the bed. Ten minuets later my house phone rang. I answered it,

" Hello." I said finally breathing normally.

" Bella? Carmella and I were wondering if you were OK. Alice had a vision of you fainting ." Emmett's voice boomed on the phone.

" Me, yeah I'm OK... I don't know why Alice saw that, I'm fine." I murmured.

" are you sure? Let me talk to Edward." Emmett said a little louder then before. I turned to Edward and gave him the phone. He looked at me then nodded to me.
" Emmett? Yeah, she says it's only a dream." Edward said calmly, which didn't surprise me. Suddenly Edward froze.  " When did Alice see this? Does she know why?" he added with worry in his voice. Edward looked at me then at Emma.
 " What?!? Edward, whats going on? " Emma shouted standing up. Edward didn't answer her. " Edward, you'll tell me right now!" She said now at my side. I looked up at her, she looked down and for the first time her expression was unsure.
  " But Emmett, She's fine. Is Alice sure ? " Edward said into the phone. " Who? She disappears? Does that mean Jacob..." Edward said nodding toward Emma, and Emma sighed.
 " Damn dogs!" She said looking at me. " Well Bella I have good news and bad news. The good thing is that your not gonna die. The bad news is that one of your nasty dog friends is going to scare you unconscious."
    I froze the laughed. Jake would never do that to me. Either would Seth,maybe Leah, but no one else. Edward looked at me as if I was crazy, which I may be, but it seemed funny that they could ever think Jake or any other werewolf could hurt me. I looked at the clock and saw it said 5:26 a.m ,then I noticed the sun start to come up and I walked over to the window just then I saw a huge figure jump at me, I screamed and fell back hitting my head on the edge of my bed.  I couldn't open my eyes, but I could hear everything. The first thing I heard was Edward's sweet velvet voice.
  " D****t Jacob. I think you managed to do what James failed to do. You killed my Bella!" Edward yelled.
 
" You stupid dogs should just leave her alone!" I heard Emma yell. " She's still a human, she's fragile!" She added.
 
 " But I didn't mean to, She should've paid attention, she would've seen it was me.". I heard Jake's voice, I smiled to myself. I knew he wouldn't hurt me, it was a stupid accident.

 " What, so now you're going to blame this on my Bella? Jacob you jumped at her with no warning!" Edward's sweet voice boomed.  I felt warmness near my face, it just kept getting hotter and hotter then I heard a whisper.
    " Bells, wake up already. Your bloodsuckers are giving me the third degree!". No doubt it was Jake. I really just wanted to smack him across his big dumb head.

  " Hey dog, Get your a*s away from her!" Emma yelled and the warmness faded. I decided I'd try to sit up, or at least open my eyes. I tried opening my eyes about five times, but could barley move my eyelids. The sixth attempt was interrupted by a cool hand on my face.
 
 " Bella, love. Just rest for now. Everything's OK. Emma and Jasper are here and Jacob is leaving." Edward's sweet voice wrapped around my whole body. I heard him hum my lullaby, I fell into his sweet voice,I fell into sleep.

Author's Note

Don't be an ass... if you have nothing nice to say... don't comment

Reviews

[Sawyer]

If you only want nice things said, then don't post to a writer's site. If you don't want critique, why are you here? I will never understand people who write on sites like this and then cry to themselves when people try to help them. Seriously.

I think your writing is horrible, but I was trying to help you improve because that's the point of these things. No one's being an a*s just to be an a*s here. If you don't want to improve... well, I guess some people are fine with the idea of sucking. But why would you post to a site intended to help writers improve? Your logic. It flaws.

+ "I froze the laughed." What laugh? Was she laughing and did something the other person said make her stop? If so, that should read, "I froze mid-laugh" or something. I froze the laughed makes no sense. You've got other weird sentences with wording that absolutely blows, so look out for that.

+ Pick your tense and stay there. If you've got this set up as a frame story with her retelling events from the present, then you can do some present, but mostly past. You can do some past if it's set in the preset (like if she's thinking about something that happened previously).
- "Edward looked at me as if I was crazy, which I may be, but it seemed funny that they could ever think Jake or any other werewolf could hurt me." You've got both past and present in there with no story context to back it up. Change it to "which I might have been" or something.

+ "...it was me."." You don't need two periods. One inside the quotation mark is all, unless you're British, in which case it should go on the outside. In no rule book is it necessary to have two. Look for other similar punctuation errors.

You know, this whole thing would read a bit better if you'd just run it through Word grammar and spellcheck. It's not hard. The computer does the work for you; you don't even have to think.

[Hotaru Miyuki]

like i said dont listen to any of them! they're just a bunch of asses! i dont get why theyre even reading it! keep going! oh and i have emma on my friends list! she's awesome too!

[Carmella]

yo bells that dudes an a*s, you rock and you know it!

[Strife]

I can say whatever I want. If you're looking for praise go to a twilight fansite. This is a WRITERS site. WRITERS critique. We do that. And for the last time, work on your grammar.