Our first date

Our first date

A Story by my life in black and white
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Simply the first story of my first "real" date.

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Our First Date

 

                    Prologue: Even though i am attempting to "entertain" you with the hilarious and somewhat humiliating stories of my life, please understand that i do not expect a publisher to offer me anything. These stories are simply to amuse you. All of these stories are 100% true, and if i offend anyone, please understand that these are simply my views on life.

 

Oh and one more thing, each story has a moral to it and if i fail to state the moral, I am pretty sure all of you will get the idea. Plus, a note to remember, these stories are not in chronological order.

 

The show must go on!

 

                  About a little over a year ago, i started dating this girl, her name was ashli. She was the exact image of what a perfect girlfriend looked like to me. She was dark complected, with dark brown hair. She was beautiful. Therefore, i was always a little bit intimidated when i was around her (still am). I liked her..allot and i wanted to impress her. Well same old story, took me a while to muster up the courage to ask her out on our first date. Ashli said yes, and i got excited. This was my chance to really impress the girl that i had a gigantic crush on. I spent the rest of the week determining what it was that i was going to wear (our date was on Friday). After determining that nothing in my closet was acceptable for her beautiful eyes, i went and spent all of the remaining 40$ on a new wardrobe from rue21. Friday rolled around and i was about to piss in my pants. I got out of school and headed home to get ready for "The Big Date."

 

                  I got home about 3:45, keep in mind of the time because our date was at 6:00. I got a shower, ironed my clothes, and finished all of the necessary things before i headed to get Ashli. I am finally ready to head out around 5:45. On my way out my dad stops me and reminds me that i did not have any gas in the "tank" whatsoever. After throwing that statement straight into the trash i flog 50 bucks from my dad for the movies, gas, and food. It is 6:15 when i finally leave the house. I arrive at Ashli's house at 6:30, and i am hating myself right now. I wait for Ashli to come out of her house (not going to the doorstep). She finally comes out looking stunning, when her grandfather comes out cussing."Ash you better get that idiot in here!" Right then i took out the Glock 9mm from my glove box and shot myself in the head...no not really.

 

                   After getting cussed out from her grandfather, he finally cools down and lets us leave. We go grab a burger from sonic ( yeah i know, great first impression right?) and head to the movies. What happened in the movies is really not worth writing because nothing happened. It was our first date, we watched the movie and enjoyed each others company. when we got out of the movies, i started thinking with my pants and not my head. I drove way, way, way out into the middle of nowhere trying to find somewhere that i could park. I could tell Ashli didn't like this, because she started to get tense. Ashli was a good girl, the kind who was beautiful but innocent when it came to guys. I was trying to score and she read me like a book. While driving down the road, i heard a sound, "PUTT, PUTT, PHSSSSSHHHH."

Zack:"Oh crap i forgot to fill up the truck!"



 

We pull over into an empty church graveyard. How ironic right?



 

Ash:"What? you forgot to feel up the truck? You've got to be kidding me right? If your trying to score, this isn't working!"



 

Zack:" Ashli I am not trying to score with you, i am serious!"

Ashli is laughing her butt off, while i try to crank the truck again. When the truck fails to crank her smile goes from :) to :(  .

 

Zack: I think there is a gas station a half a mile up the road.

Ash: Are you flippin serious?

 

Some date right? The girl of my dreams and here i am forgetting to feel up on gas.

 

Zack: We don't have any choice

Ash : well i guess we better get to walking then.

 

We raced across the highway to the gas station. It was there that i was reminded i left the twenty for gas in the truck.

 

I hate my life...

 

We race back dodging traffic, laughing at how much of and idiot i am.

 

When we got back to the truck i stopped while she was dying out laughing. i looked at her, and i gazed into her beautiful eyes. i was in love with this girl, and she knew it. She stopped laughing and came closer. It was there at the scene of all of my mistakes that i realized that i was having the time of my life. We kissed, and then we kissed some more and then we walked back with a 5 gallon can in my hand and a twenty in her hand that we got gas, walked back, and drove home.

 

 

Ashli was and is definitely not a phase. She was my first real love. Safe to say 11 months later we are still going strong, and i am loving it. She is my sun. People ask me all the time how i am 17 and i enjoy dating just 1 girl for so long.

 

The Answer: yes i do think about being "free" from a relationship, if i said that i didn't i would be lying, but its when i look in her i eyes that i am reminded of why i have stuck it out this long, why I love it and why i will stick it out to the very end.



 

© 2010 my life in black and white


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Aww (: I enjoyed reading this (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


This story didn't bore me at all it was very good and i very much enjoyed reading it :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


You make it sound so sweet and perfect. Only I can't help but wonder.. are you both still so perfect??? Are you still just as crazy about her now than when you wrote this? Ha. Ha. Ha.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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like the other one, this is cute. i love the way you write, it's very personal. i agree she is lucky to have you ^^

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Posted 16 Years Ago


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very cool! to tell you the truth i couldn't stop reading i sort of guessed were it was going but i still had to read the end...nicely done!

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hi my name is Zack Steele, while i lead a very ordinary teenage lifestyle , many of my stories are not so ordinary..due to the crazy lifestyle of my family,friends, and just my overall view on life, t.. more..

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