Nirvana

   

Have you wondered how old we are...?

creatures of life, from years afar.

We are just souls, shedding vessels,

as we ,in each life learn lessons.

Karma keeps us sending back,

to the earthly realm to fulfill the understanding we lack.

The chakra keeps rotating,

a boat caught in a whirlpool.

We must understand and seek the truth,

Fill our souls with compassion and faith.

This eternal pain ends,

once the path to nirvana exposes.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A boat caught in a whirl pool. Wonderful description to describe karma. Coming round in full circle. Poetically conveyed and enjoyable writing.

Chris

[Seuwandi]

Thanks Chris!

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome