The End

She won't even look at me

I always thought that being invisible would be cool

turns out, it isn't

I speak, she just sits there

I look at her, she doesn't look back

No response no matter what I say

... This isn't the first time I had to watch myself die

But it is the first time without you.

Reviews

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Powerful emotion here. Great poem. You describe one of the most painful things in life: excluding rejection and purposeful ignorance. I like the "..." point. It captures the silence well. Great read. Painful in all it reveals.

[Heromen Selena]

aw man, this makes me feel bad. I'm in this situation, but on the other end.....it's well expressed. Good job.

[Victoria Elizabeth]

awww, sooooooo sad!!!!!!!! I totally can realate to this!!!

[just is]

awe this is so sad, but so well expressed.