The End

She won't even look at me

I always thought that being invisible would be cool

turns out, it isn't

I speak, she just sits there

I look at her, she doesn't look back

No response no matter what I say

... This isn't the first time I had to watch myself die

But it is the first time without you.

Reviews

[Bare trees]

You've been tricked by your own belief's in this one. I think many people feel this way until they realize being ignored is no fun and hurtful. It leaves one feeling like it's time to give up. Nice poem.

[MOON]

Poignant expression of the loss of love... I always thought invisible would be cool turns out , it isn't.

[halina]

like this a lot, well done

[Richy Moon]

;( Alot of emoation in a few words. I like it.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

emotional write when there is distance between two people who are supposed to open with each other and in love. if we each cannot spend the time and work together to save something, it is probably not meant to be.

[Monica]

This is a very sad and emotional poem...expressed and written so well.
Your words have power behind them that so many can relate to.
Great Job!

[Your Perfect Disaster]

This is depressing and sad. Nice write though, it's as if you can actually FEEL the heartbreak and loneliness. I'm sorry you're having to go through this....

[Leigh]

Nicely expressed and thought through, love is cruel

[Shy Girl]

Why do I see a reflection in the mirror that is no longer there...like the mask of one is hidden to the face of the other...two sides to one person. (death of the vivid...leaving the saddened) I'm just looking past the pain to how when you sit on your bed and gaze at yourself in the dresser mirror...hating the image that can't talk...won't answer why you aren't wanted...beautiful on the surface but a hollow image through the two windows that become shadowed and shattered. (eyes of glass) Great poem and wonderful feelings that came through each word wrote :)

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Sad, but beautifully expressed...ignorance is perhaps one of the worst outcomes if you ask me...our inability to do anything starts tearing us apart...
Good write.