Twelve Hours of Death

The clock strikes one, that is when I find you

That is when I hold you

That is when I fell in love with you

The clock strikes two

That is when I smile at you

That is when I devote myself to you

That is when I decide I can't lose you

The clock strikes three

That is when you say you love me

The clock strikes four

That is when you make my heart soar

That is when I say, "I love you more."

The clock strikes five

That is when you start to lie

That is when, you think, our love will die

The clock strikes six

That is when our conversations go into a mix

That is when you break my heart, that will never fix

The clock strikes seven

That is when I contemplate going to Heaven

The clock strikes Eight

That is when you try to stop me... but it's too late

The clock strikes nine

That is when you go on with your life, without mine

The clock strikes ten

That is when we start talking again

The clock strikes eleven

That is when you fall for him, again

The clock strikes twelve

That is when I die

That is when I say my farewell

That is when I tell you, "I love you more than I could ever tell."

That is when I part, for either Heaven or Hell.

The clock strikes twelve-oh-one

That is when I'm gone

Reviews

[that-little-green-monst..]

Wonderful read! Such powerful emotions. Great job!

[just is]

WOW this is really awesome and has depth to it.
Simply wonderful!

This is really Good!

....such a wonderful write.

love the rhymes and flow, makes a wonderful song.