Bigger & Better

Bigger & Better

A Poem by Sirius King
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Bigger & Better

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Bigger & Better

 

Big house, big car

Big lights, big dreams

No more sweating the small stuff

I’m off to bigger and better things

 

Breaking down barricades

By all necessary means

Step out of my way

I’m off to bigger and better things

 

A sold out stadium

The crowd begs for me to sing

My presence is their present

I’m off to bigger and better things

 

Advisor to Presidents

Council to Kings

Paying the cost to be the boss

I’m off to bigger and better things

 

An angry alarm clock rings

Reality really stings

I’ll hit the snooze button

To live out bigger and better dreams

© 2013 Sirius King


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I love this one! It had a bit surprising end for me, as I wouldn`t expect everyone to dream to be "bigger and better" ,but a huge part of people do. Maybe some dream of "deeper and better" - visualizing the spirit. Bigger dreams as we can see, make the earth small place. I love your great sense of rhymes. and my favorite lines are the last :
An angry alarm clock rings
Reality really stings
I’ll hit the snooze button
To live out my bigger and better dreams

-nour-
June-013

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thank you!



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DOn't stop dreaming my friend. Don't ask how, just keep believing and start doing and let the rest fall into place.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

i agree, will do

thank you Mark!
"I like that entry, 'My presence is their present' " cleverly worded !

However, bigger and better is not necessarily nicer and sweeter (at least for my anyways) ... I have found the best things in life are free and the sweetest things in life are often small, adorable, and sometimes even fuzzy.

Always carry a little tin of sugar through life, Serenus, and you will be prepared for when situations turn sour on you. :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dw817

11 Years Ago

Good to hear from you too ! I'm updating my PULSE today and putting you in for the top-3 for Thursda.. read more
Sirius King

11 Years Ago

cool cool...i'm honored!

:-)
dw817

11 Years Ago

It's me that's honored. I absolutely LOVE your Big Bad Wolf poem ! Here's hoping you make heads or t.. read more
A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thank u Sami!
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
I love this one! It had a bit surprising end for me, as I wouldn`t expect everyone to dream to be "bigger and better" ,but a huge part of people do. Maybe some dream of "deeper and better" - visualizing the spirit. Bigger dreams as we can see, make the earth small place. I love your great sense of rhymes. and my favorite lines are the last :
An angry alarm clock rings
Reality really stings
I’ll hit the snooze button
To live out my bigger and better dreams

-nour-
June-013

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thank you!
Good write, bro. You have the fastest pen hand in the west. lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

this one came pretty quick too lol

thanx poetic!
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

11 Years Ago

Don't mention it bro.

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