The power of expression remains, perhaps, the truest of freedoms, and it is the one we writers depend on more than any other. Is anything more precious than our words, after all?
And we should use it to build, not destroy, to bring light and hope, rather than pain and despair.
Words, like concepts of power, are purely neutral. It's how you use them that counts.
A great poem, Serenus. Keep it up.
I love the theme and the message but compared to the (albeit few) other works of yours I've read, this one didn't have that flow and rhythm of other poems of yours I enjoyed. While it may not be particularly constructive to say this, I can't really point out what exactly about this piece I didn't enjoy. NB: I think it's a good piece, just not your best or pales in comparison
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11 Years Ago
i think the flow sounds better to me when i read it out loud, maybe this is more of a performance pi.. read morei think the flow sounds better to me when i read it out loud, maybe this is more of a performance piece
Catchy. When I read it I hear a happy melodic tune that you could whistle while skip down the street. Love the title. Love the message.
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11 Years Ago
whistling "Censor These Nuts!" down the street?....hmmm...i'll have to try that sometime lol
<.. read morewhistling "Censor These Nuts!" down the street?....hmmm...i'll have to try that sometime lol
The power of expression remains, perhaps, the truest of freedoms, and it is the one we writers depend on more than any other. Is anything more precious than our words, after all?
And we should use it to build, not destroy, to bring light and hope, rather than pain and despair.
Words, like concepts of power, are purely neutral. It's how you use them that counts.
A great poem, Serenus. Keep it up.
Ha there's too many of those nutters to contain, unless we make peanut butter of them, entertaining read my friend....no one should be censored but they seem to come across the loudest, so lets, yes!
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11 Years Ago
a little duct tape will do the trick! ;-)
11 Years Ago
Ha that stuff comes in handy for a myriad of uses ;-)
its hard to say, if someone makes a farfetched or unbelievable accusation that goes against the norm or poppular opinion, even if he made a valid point, then he will still be considered crazy.. now I don’t want to break out any conspiracies,
well, all good "conspiracy theories" have some true to them...sometimes more truth than the "officia.. read morewell, all good "conspiracy theories" have some true to them...sometimes more truth than the "official story"
11 Years Ago
I misunderstood it, re reading it, i see your talking more about hypocritical b******s that change .. read moreI misunderstood it, re reading it, i see your talking more about hypocritical b******s that change public opinion with hatred and confusion.
I agree with the complete poem. I like the ending a lot. First step to dumb-size a nation. Stop free thinking and words. Mark Twain was disliked when he lived. He wrote the truth. It is a words. People fear the truth. Old wise quote. "Stand for nothing. What is the purpose of life?" Thank you for the excellent poetry. Freedom is missed when it is gone.
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Hahaha! I love this! Especially, how the beginning curse words were censored and the topic was against censoring! It's awesome. Strongly political with an even stronger slice of satire.
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