Baby, You’re a Drug

A song I wrote...and turned into a poem

Baby, You’re a Drug

 

Baby,

You’re a drug

An addiction

Maybe,

You can numb

My afflictions

With one touch

No prescriptions

 

…Baby, you’re a drug

 

Baby

I can’t lie

I breathe you in

And I get high

A free ride

On cloud nine

Capturing my body

And corrupting my mind

 

…Baby, you’re a drug

 

You flow all through my veins

A rush

Straight to my brain

You take away

All of my pain

A sensation

That keeps me sane 

 

…Baby, you’re a drug

 

You’re a bad habit

And I’m just an addict

Every time I try to quit

You call…

And I’m right back at it

 

Baby,

You’re a drug

An addiction

Maybe,

You can numb

My afflictions

With one touch

No prescriptions

 

…Baby, you’re a drug

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

I've done drugs, I've had girl friends that were no good for me that did drugs. I've done drugs while having sex. I did so many drugs I couldn't have sex. I've had sex to avoid thinking about drugs and I've had sex to just avoid thinking. Last night I had a dream a chick was giving me a blow job while snorting coke off my stomach and I've done that too. Goddamnit Mr Raymone I thought this song was the f*****g bomb!!!! I'm not on drugs right now in case you were wondering.

[Sirius King]

I feel u man...Woman have always been my issue lol

[SHEEMA HUQ]

what a great idea, resulting in a finely crafted poem/lyrics
you even sound slighly intoxicated or doped up by your subject
I really enjoyed Serenus, thanks

[Sirius King]

thanx Sheema! :-)

[Tunder]

Awesome write! This flows really well and would go to music perfectly! Keep writing :)

[Sirius King]

thanx for checking it out! :-)

[EvilAngel]

This flows so well and it's got a sad but wonderful emotion to it and I'm pretty sure we all got that little obsessive addictive behavior in all of us when it comes to love. Awesome work!

[Sirius King]

thanx man, i appreciate it

[LA Lorena]

I liked this. Are you gonna to put it to music and sing it for us?

[Sirius King]

i might...I've been slackin on my music as of late lol

[KAOlmsted]

"You’re a bad habit
And I’m just an addict
Every time I try to quit
You call…
And I’m right back at it..."

Oh yeah. I felt that one in my bones ;-) Great write, SR. And, you know what? BR may have gotten here first, but that is sooooo not what I was going to say :-D

[Sirius King]

Lol... I'm glad, cuz I would be worried... With him, not so much ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

With him it's a given, but you'd be surprised what I've gotten up to ;-)

[Sirius King]

Is Kimmer "the bad chick" coming out? Lol

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! I put her away years ago ;-) Every now and then she pokes her head out, though...

[Sirius King]

Hmmm I can just imagine ;-)

[KAOlmsted]

;-)

[SinglePoet]

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

[Sirius King]

THANX THANX THANX! ;-)

[AWickedMoon]

I love it!

[Sirius King]

Thanx!

[Frieda P]

Oh nice, I'd like someone to serenade me with this little ditty. ;-)

[Sirius King]

let me warm up my voice lol

[Frieda P]

:-D

[Sirius King]

:-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice metaphor...good beat to this poem...and clever use of subtle rhyme.

like this one lots...it's a "go back to it again" type of piece.

[Sirius King]

yea it needs work...thanx!