May I Borrow Your Pen?

This Is Dedicated To The Kimmer! I Hope You Like :-))

May I Borrow Your Pen?

 

May I borrow your pen?

The one that holds

 Genius within

Poking holes

Through many poets

Paper thin skin

Leaking ink

That makes them

Re- think

Their careers

Over again

 

May I borrow your pen?

The one that holds

 The master key

That will unleash

My inner master piece

A sword

With the blood of

Literary casualties

Wounding other writers

Who try to compete

With your awesomeness

…May they rest in peace

 

May I borrow your pen?

I’ll try to remember

 To give it back

But the power

Of the ballpoint

Is something no poet

Should ever lack

I promise

To use its power for good

Anything else would be a sin

So what say you?

Lend to a friend...your inspiration?

…May I borrow your pen?

 

 

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

SR!!!!!! :-D Oh my god...Oh my f*****g god. Thank you. Thank you thank you thank you. Are you serious?? You don't need my pen, baby, yours is already locked and loaded! Oh my god. I wish you could see my face right now. I may never EVER stop smiling. Thank you. So much. I love this with my whole entire heart. Thank you.

[Sirius King]

LOL!....I'm glad you like it!...Your a huge inspiration, I i love your words...so keep writing! :-)
My pen tends to run out of ink quite often lol...so i'll prob need to borrow

[Sirius King]

...yours pretty soon :-)

[KAOlmsted]

xoxo thank you. You seriously made my day...hell, you made my whole damn week.

[Sirius King]

awww i glad! :-)

Have a great F'n weekend!!! lol :-)

[KAOlmsted]

Thanks...I will...people will wonder why I'm so damn chipper *laugh* You too, SR.

[Sirius King]

;-)
anytime your feeling down
or in doubt..give this a read :-)

[KAOlmsted]

You know I will, SR...you know I will. xoxo

[Sirius King]

:-)

[Mark]

Let's see now: how to compose a verse which is at
once praise-filled, deeply insightful and humorous?
Ah, yes: read this poem. Class dismissed.
Nicely said, sir(?) Is the PAP a group, or a contest?
If the latter, I have a few I'd like to submit on the subject.
If a group, how can I find out if I am already a member, or need to join?

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Oh I think that this one is just brilliant
oozing with creative energy, quick wit and talent
wonderfully written....by crayon or pencil?

[Sirius King]

Crayon, magic marker, chalk....anything i can get my hands on lol

[john alan willox]

use your own damn pen - it seems to work just fine :)

[Sirius King]

lol thanx man, i really appreciate that!

[Antonio Valentino]

I'm thinkin i wanna borrow your pen my friend..

sounds like the person holding it has his own rightful skills

great gift to your friend, she obviously appreciated it very much as anyone should have

[Sirius King]

thanx man!... Yea KAOlmsted is great, u should check her out!

[Baby Ricochet]

Great dedication Mr Raymone. Kimmer's my WC girl.

[Sirius King]

thanx man...yea she's the greatest!

[Dr. Wood ?]

great poem my friend...And you cheered the lady up I see.....Brilliant idea though...I loved it

[Sirius King]

thanx Doc :-)

[That_Girl]

Haha this is awesome! My goodness did she love it too.... how sweet of you. Great write, perfect for her. :)

[Sirius King]

lol...thanx for checking it out :-)