A Kiss Is Not a Kiss

A Kiss Is Not a Kiss

A Poem by Sirius King

A Kiss Is Not a Kiss

 

A kiss is not just a kiss

…A kiss can be

The key

That unlocks

Love

Life

And countless other

Limitless

Possibilities

 

A kiss is not just a kiss

…A kiss can be

The cure

For loneliness

Unworthiness

It can be

Confidence

For the unsure

 

A kiss is not just a kiss

…A kiss can be

Recognition

That you deserve love

That you deserve life

It gives you

Permission

 

 So until you find someone

That will show you

 Love and

Affection


...Look in the mirror

 And blow a kiss

To your own

Beautiful

Deserving

Reflection




 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Sirius King


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yes there's many view to be taken from that of one kiss and you stated good ones here to be looked upon. you brought the mind to think here of what doors are lock and unlocked from giving and receiving a simple kiss of affection. for us to even look at or consider love we must look at ourselves and and blow a kiss at the same one in the mirror to love. as always keep writing fellow writer.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

very true

thanx for your words :-)
kelvin

11 Years Ago

You're welcome



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Well spoken, very optimistic!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thanx man
Well-written. It's uplifting. We must love ourselves. If we can KISS others as sign of our love, we must KISS ourselves,too. (Not too literal.....a kiss means love). Kudus!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

very true...thanx :-)
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

:)
I read in your "About Me" that you write poetry to strengthen your songwriting. I hear the music in this, and I'd love to hear this sung.

Poetry as lyrics always stay with me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thanx for checking it out, i might work it into a song :0)
I like how you decided to write this poem. It flows nicely and the form at first was kind of confusing but then I understood it better when I grasped it. I liked it a lot

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thank u :-)
a good inspirational write
kissing optimisim to it's fullest capacity
and no doubt, excerising your mouth's muscles vigorusly!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

hahaha :-))
SHEEMA HUQ

11 Years Ago

.....and they are worse if they are cold and succulant and from an imposing batty old aunt with cid.. read more
Sirius King

11 Years Ago

bad breath with no teeth lol...yikes! lol
I am absolutely in love with this poem. Poetry makes you feel something, it speaks to you, it teaches you... And this is lovely. It's not just the rhyme, or rhythm, but the message. Awesome write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thanx, i really appreciate that
I like it a lot, optimistic and insightful. Nicely done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thanx! :-)
yes there's many view to be taken from that of one kiss and you stated good ones here to be looked upon. you brought the mind to think here of what doors are lock and unlocked from giving and receiving a simple kiss of affection. for us to even look at or consider love we must look at ourselves and and blow a kiss at the same one in the mirror to love. as always keep writing fellow writer.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

very true

thanx for your words :-)
kelvin

11 Years Ago

You're welcome
I really like this!! The ending pleasantly surprised me!! Yes, we must love ourselves before we can love another, and if that person is not here yet, then we do get the benefit of a kiss from our heart!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

im glad u like it, thanx for checking it out :-)
wow, i kept thinking of the first kiss with my now significant other...and how great it was...and how it seemed to give us both that permission to move forward with a different kind of relationship...

and then there was your ending...and yes, i guess we need to do that once in awhile...and smartly, because we need to know we love ourselves first...then we are much more inclined to feel that others will love us too.

nice poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

very true

thanx for checking it out! :-)

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