yes there's many view to be taken from that of one kiss and you stated good ones here to be looked upon. you brought the mind to think here of what doors are lock and unlocked from giving and receiving a simple kiss of affection. for us to even look at or consider love we must look at ourselves and and blow a kiss at the same one in the mirror to love. as always keep writing fellow writer.
Well-written. It's uplifting. We must love ourselves. If we can KISS others as sign of our love, we must KISS ourselves,too. (Not too literal.....a kiss means love). Kudus!
I like how you decided to write this poem. It flows nicely and the form at first was kind of confusing but then I understood it better when I grasped it. I liked it a lot
.....and they are worse if they are cold and succulant and from an imposing batty old aunt with cid.. read more.....and they are worse if they are cold and succulant and from an imposing batty old aunt with cider on her breath!! ha ha
I am absolutely in love with this poem. Poetry makes you feel something, it speaks to you, it teaches you... And this is lovely. It's not just the rhyme, or rhythm, but the message. Awesome write!
yes there's many view to be taken from that of one kiss and you stated good ones here to be looked upon. you brought the mind to think here of what doors are lock and unlocked from giving and receiving a simple kiss of affection. for us to even look at or consider love we must look at ourselves and and blow a kiss at the same one in the mirror to love. as always keep writing fellow writer.
I really like this!! The ending pleasantly surprised me!! Yes, we must love ourselves before we can love another, and if that person is not here yet, then we do get the benefit of a kiss from our heart!
wow, i kept thinking of the first kiss with my now significant other...and how great it was...and how it seemed to give us both that permission to move forward with a different kind of relationship...
and then there was your ending...and yes, i guess we need to do that once in awhile...and smartly, because we need to know we love ourselves first...then we are much more inclined to feel that others will love us too.
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