Another Lonely Night

 

Something in the air

Just doesn’t feel right

With you gone-The stars

Don’t seem to shine as bright

Maybe me missing you is wrong

But no one else understands my plight

If I called you right now

 Would I have any words to recite?

Would you answer?

 Would you be angry?

 Or artificially polite?

An argument I can deal with

…but not another lonely night.

Do I truly miss you?

Or do I miss the fire-

Only you can ignite?

There is no behaving

When it’s you I’m craving

My lust has blurred my sight

My lonesome song has won

My pride has taken flight

I quickly dial your number

You answer- to my delight

You sound happy it’s me…

My lip,

I take a bite

Looks like it won’t be…

Just another lonely night

 

 

 

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

"Would you be angry?
Or artificially polite?"
-the latter is much worse.

I wasn't expecting a happy ending (oh gross, get your mind out of the gutter :-p) but I'm glad it's there. A lot of times we project ourselves into not taking action, and we miss out because of what we THINK the other person is going to say or do. Truth is, we never know. Thanks for sharing this, SR...well done.

[Sirius King]

my mind lives in the gutter, unfortunately...or fortunately, depending on how u look at it lol

and yes the the ending was a happy one lol

thanx again :-)

[KAOlmsted]

I guess that makes us Gutter Mind and Potty Mouth...we could fight the crime of prudism :-D
read moreI guess that makes us Gutter Mind and Potty Mouth...we could fight the crime of prudism :-D

Always my pleasure, SR ;-)

[Sirius King]

ha!

:-D

[Carolann Dowsett]

Awesome I love the way you question whether you are missing her or the passion she ignites. Nice work, I love the ending.

[Sirius King]

thanx! :-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Bitter sweet. Nice

[Sirius King]

thanx man!