Really powerful write, I liked mostly the end, which makes a sadness arise in me...Everyone needs love, sometimes people want to be "cheated" just to escape from loneliness. You need this love, until it kills your own feelings and senses. But then...Why breaker of promises? As you feel love, you dont want to feel, as so many times we can`t choose what is inside heart.
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Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
love is a complicated feeling... sometimes too complicated for words...you know?
.. read morelove is a complicated feeling... sometimes too complicated for words...you know?
thank u Sugar Plum :-)
11 Years Ago
maybe I know sometimes .. :) thank u too! I would like to read more
Wow, to be honest I feel that there is nothing more you can add to such a piece. This piece has a depth to it that scratches the surface of our ignorant beliefs. I loved it. Excellent write!
it's beautiful. it starts off begging for love and then ends begging for false love at least until your own love has diminished... really strikes a cord in my heart
I really like the format. There was a plaintive quality that worked well but the reader knew despite all the requests this love wasn't going to make it. It was too unbalanced and too late. Sad really.
Really powerful write, I liked mostly the end, which makes a sadness arise in me...Everyone needs love, sometimes people want to be "cheated" just to escape from loneliness. You need this love, until it kills your own feelings and senses. But then...Why breaker of promises? As you feel love, you dont want to feel, as so many times we can`t choose what is inside heart.
-- nour --
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
love is a complicated feeling... sometimes too complicated for words...you know?
.. read morelove is a complicated feeling... sometimes too complicated for words...you know?
thank u Sugar Plum :-)
11 Years Ago
maybe I know sometimes .. :) thank u too! I would like to read more
Liked it as is... A potent expression of emotion, desperation even, that's great to see from a male.
I'll tell anyone, "if you're a male and want to write (or sing, it applies here) check that damn ego at the door!"
Great job in doing that in your writing. Awesome to see. Keep it up
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CreativeCreatureTrappedInACubicle...
in desperate need of an outlet
...Review My Work And I Will Return The Favor!!!....THANX :-)
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