My skin, my skin, it looks paper thin, white and very Irish but its taken a good leatherin! If you felt every blow at once it would be a sin, every Sensai screaming kiyas! Oh what a din.
Like it dude. I'm trying to get my girlfriends brother on here to do a poem for mixed race people,the trials of being in the middle! At least we can pick a side lol
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
nice rhymes lol...a mixed race point of view would be great...everyone has a story, it should be tol.. read morenice rhymes lol...a mixed race point of view would be great...everyone has a story, it should be told
My skin, my skin, it looks paper thin, white and very Irish but its taken a good leatherin! If you felt every blow at once it would be a sin, every Sensai screaming kiyas! Oh what a din.
Like it dude. I'm trying to get my girlfriends brother on here to do a poem for mixed race people,the trials of being in the middle! At least we can pick a side lol
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
nice rhymes lol...a mixed race point of view would be great...everyone has a story, it should be tol.. read morenice rhymes lol...a mixed race point of view would be great...everyone has a story, it should be told
Nicely done. An amazing message and a great flow. Everyone should think this way there is no need to be ashamed of their skin. We were all made with gods image we have a lil of him even do some deny it. Good job! I'm proud of my skin and no one can say otherwise. :D
-SkyeBlanco
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
thats exactly my point, so many ppl suffer from self-hate, its a shame
the only way to happine.. read morethats exactly my point, so many ppl suffer from self-hate, its a shame
the only way to happiness is the embrace every part of yourself, even if the world condemns u for it
A very powerful poem, with a wonderful message. Everyone should feel this way. Have pride in the skin they're in. Thanks for sharing this, I really enjoyed it.
The message is truly beautiful and well said. I like a lot of it, some parts I think could be changed for different reasons, but that is my preference as a writer. I still enjoy this piece as it is. 'Your' skin is a very important thing, indeed.
A gorgeous message you've shared...I hope many people get to see this work of art.
12 Years Ago
wow thanx again...I hope so too, too many people focus on the negative- when it comes to different s.. read morewow thanx again...I hope so too, too many people focus on the negative- when it comes to different skin colors. Everyone should embrace their own, and appreciate others.
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