Temperamental Times (Haiku)

I Added New Ones :-)

Temperamental Times 1

Haiku by Serenus

All the leaves turn brown

When Summer trips and Falls down

Spring screams, Winter frowns

 

Temperamental Times 2

Haiku by Serenus

Spring and Summer brawl

The death of them both brings Fall

Winter revives all

 

Temperamental Times 3

Haiku by Serenus

Oh what a bummer

It is the end of Summer

Soon Winter’s slumber

 

Temperamental Times 4

Haiku by Serenus

Middle of the road

A war between Hot and Cold

Spring and Fall takes hold

 

Temperamental Times 5

Haiku by Serenus

Heat, Wind, Rain, Earth, Ice

The elements of real change

The origins of life

Temperamental Times 6

Haiku by Serenus

Rain washes the pain

While wind stirs the soul within

Time lets sunshine in

Temperamental Times 7

Haiku by Serenus

Warm winters warnings

Unpredictable storming

Its global warming

 

Temperamental Times 8

Haiku by Serenus

Whistles in the wind

A season dripping with sin

Evil pumpkins grin

 

Temperamental Times 9

Haiku by Serenus

On All Hallows Eve

Released souls of the deceased

Cry out and roam free

 

Temperamental Times 10

Haiku by Serenus

Gratefulness heavy

A turkey glazed in gravy

My crazy family

 

Temperamental Times 11

Haiku by Serenus

Pray in a hurry

So we can eat the turkey

Come late…eat jerky :-( 

Temperamental Times 12

Haiku by Serenus

On this silent night

Celebrate the birth of Christ

With food, love, and light

Temperamental Times 13

Haiku by Serenus

…Born and died for us

The reason for the season

His name is Jesus        

Temperamental Times 14

Haiku by Serenus

  

Five, Four, Three, Two, One!

A New Year Has Just Begun

One more Toast…I’m done

Temperamental Times 15

Haiku by Serenus

 

New year, and new me

That is what they tend to say

…I heard that last year

Temperamental Times 16

Haiku by Serenus

Martin Luther King

Fought for us all to be free

Alive is his Dream!

Temperamental Times 17

Haiku by Serenus

A heart for a heart

More than just candy and cards

Letting down your guard

  Temperamental Times18

Haiku by Serenus

No, this is not sand

Building castles out of snow

Winter Wonderland

 

Temperamental Times19

Haiku by Serenus

At a rainbows end

A leprechaun’s pot of gold

Holds riches untold

 

Author's Note

I will continue to add to this series over time...tell me what u think so far :-)

Reviews

[Broken Soul]

All of these are very well written! My favorite is number seven. It uses alliteration in its first line, "Warm winters warnings", which makes the reader read faster and faster. Then you continue in this one with the use of end rhyme, making it flow better and making it more appealing to the reader. There's also great imagery here, putting a different picture in the readers mind with every single line.. There's assonance used in "Warm" and "Warnings" which isn't very noticeable, but it is also very notable. The picture and song were nice additions to fit the theme of these Haiku's. Fantastic!

[Sirius King]

thanx again! :-)

[That_Guy]

great job man. loved the first two

[Sirius King]

thanx!

[That_Girl]

The first is my favorite. Brilliant!

[Sirius King]

thanx im glad u like it :-)

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a worded wonderfully and captures the essence of all the seasons with a new tone, and unique life.

[Sirius King]

thanx for checking it out! :-)

[Poetic Beauty]

you are more than welcome. They are beautiful

[Sirius King]

:-)