Temperamental Times (Haiku)

I Added New Ones :-)

Temperamental Times 1

Haiku by Serenus

All the leaves turn brown

When Summer trips and Falls down

Spring screams, Winter frowns

 

Temperamental Times 2

Haiku by Serenus

Spring and Summer brawl

The death of them both brings Fall

Winter revives all

 

Temperamental Times 3

Haiku by Serenus

Oh what a bummer

It is the end of Summer

Soon Winter’s slumber

 

Temperamental Times 4

Haiku by Serenus

Middle of the road

A war between Hot and Cold

Spring and Fall takes hold

 

Temperamental Times 5

Haiku by Serenus

Heat, Wind, Rain, Earth, Ice

The elements of real change

The origins of life

Temperamental Times 6

Haiku by Serenus

Rain washes the pain

While wind stirs the soul within

Time lets sunshine in

Temperamental Times 7

Haiku by Serenus

Warm winters warnings

Unpredictable storming

Its global warming

 

Temperamental Times 8

Haiku by Serenus

Whistles in the wind

A season dripping with sin

Evil pumpkins grin

 

Temperamental Times 9

Haiku by Serenus

On All Hallows Eve

Released souls of the deceased

Cry out and roam free

 

Temperamental Times 10

Haiku by Serenus

Gratefulness heavy

A turkey glazed in gravy

My crazy family

 

Temperamental Times 11

Haiku by Serenus

Pray in a hurry

So we can eat the turkey

Come late…eat jerky :-( 

Temperamental Times 12

Haiku by Serenus

On this silent night

Celebrate the birth of Christ

With food, love, and light

Temperamental Times 13

Haiku by Serenus

…Born and died for us

The reason for the season

His name is Jesus        

Temperamental Times 14

Haiku by Serenus

  

Five, Four, Three, Two, One!

A New Year Has Just Begun

One more Toast…I’m done

Temperamental Times 15

Haiku by Serenus

 

New year, and new me

That is what they tend to say

…I heard that last year

Temperamental Times 16

Haiku by Serenus

Martin Luther King

Fought for us all to be free

Alive is his Dream!

Temperamental Times 17

Haiku by Serenus

A heart for a heart

More than just candy and cards

Letting down your guard

  Temperamental Times18

Haiku by Serenus

No, this is not sand

Building castles out of snow

Winter Wonderland

 

Temperamental Times19

Haiku by Serenus

At a rainbows end

A leprechaun’s pot of gold

Holds riches untold

 

Author's Note

I will continue to add to this series over time...tell me what u think so far :-)

Reviews

[Broken Soul]

All of these are very well written! My favorite is number seven. It uses alliteration in its first line, "Warm winters warnings", which makes the reader read faster and faster. Then you continue in this one with the use of end rhyme, making it flow better and making it more appealing to the reader. There's also great imagery here, putting a different picture in the readers mind with every single line.. There's assonance used in "Warm" and "Warnings" which isn't very noticeable, but it is also very notable. The picture and song were nice additions to fit the theme of these Haiku's. Fantastic!

[Sirius King]

thanx again! :-)

[wordwarrior]

These Haikus are just brilliant! I have never been able to get that ah ha moment at the end, but each of yours are amazing. I couldn't choose a favourite, loved every one. You certainly have a rare talent for this form.
I asked for 20 lines or less? Maybe you could chose a selection that meets that criteria because they really are quite beautifully penned.

[Frieda P]

Wow, you just about have it all covered here! ;-) #10 made me laugh...funny. Good read, all very interesting little odes to temperament.

[Sirius King]

its like a calendar of haiku's lol

thanx! :-)

[Frieda P]

Yes it sure is! ;-)

[quinfinn]

marvelous, every one! you have been on a haiku rampage and i am pleased with the result!

[Sirius King]

it does seem that way dosent it? lol

thanx!

[quinfinn]

great stuff, my friend

[Ahmad Cox]

Amazing ode to the clash between seasons

[Sirius King]

thanx for checking it out! :-)

[YourMajesty2102]

You just went through all seasons in one sitting! Love it! Good job!

[Sirius King]

thanx, im going to try to get all of the holidays too


thanx for checking it out!

[Steven Cash]

Real real nice man!

[Sirius King]

thanx for checking it out :-)

[Steven Cash]

np @ all man

[Baby Ricochet]

Love it. Great twist on the Haiku

[Sirius King]

thanx :-)

[KAOlmsted]

They are all so good; hard to pick a favorite. But...gun to my head...#5. Keep adding more, yes! I love these!

[Sirius King]

thanks!... ill try to make one for all seasons and holidays :-)

[Poems]

All excellent. Fall is my favorite time and you've created some really interesting and imaginative haikus here. Nice writing.

~Pendragon~

[Sirius King]

thanx for reading :-)

i love fall too...spring might be my favorite tho :-)

[Poems]

You're welcome. And yes, spring is a time of renewal so I can see why you would like it. :)

[Sirius King]

Definitely :-)