You've done it again, my friend. Beyond Impressed! Pac was one of the few of us who truly operated on a higher wave length, the issue is he chose rap as his platform. So many closed minds to the art itself, his messages will never truly be appreciated. Well done, superb tribute! If anyone doesn't own his book of poetry(2Pac) look it up and order it! Title, "The Rose That Grew From Concrete."
Excellent poem, as I feel more people should believe in this. The only thing I don't agree with is where you say "the signs in scripture paint the whole picture" but that's just my individual beliefs and takes nothing away from the words. I'm gonna review more of your older stuff, I've being doing it recently, as I found people won't go back a few pages and review older work,even though it could be a week old!
Always a pleasure to review your work, your personality shines through in your (rather large) collec.. read moreAlways a pleasure to review your work, your personality shines through in your (rather large) collection of poems. Like I said, stop messing around and get published dude!
11 Years Ago
If i knew how i would man! lol
11 Years Ago
They have offices dude, find one online,get a phone number and then get an interview. Its like the m.. read moreThey have offices dude, find one online,get a phone number and then get an interview. Its like the music buisness, they need people to keep writing so they can keep selling books. Try and arrange your poems in collections (you have too many to make one lol ) by genre or just how they feel.
I'll let you know when I know more, I'll research.
You've done it again, my friend. Beyond Impressed! Pac was one of the few of us who truly operated on a higher wave length, the issue is he chose rap as his platform. So many closed minds to the art itself, his messages will never truly be appreciated. Well done, superb tribute! If anyone doesn't own his book of poetry(2Pac) look it up and order it! Title, "The Rose That Grew From Concrete."
I believe we have all been asleep at one time or another.. waking up is a slap in the face when you see what's being done.. write on!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
it truely is, but once your awake you can never go back to sleep again
thank you.. read moreit truely is, but once your awake you can never go back to sleep again
thank you Lori!
11 Years Ago
Cannot go back to sleep and now there is this heavy burden on your shoulders and you feel like you n.. read moreCannot go back to sleep and now there is this heavy burden on your shoulders and you feel like you need to tell everyone everything all at once and they are still sleeping...
exactly...now your the crazy guy with the bullhorn preaching about end times lol...that's how i feel.. read moreexactly...now your the crazy guy with the bullhorn preaching about end times lol...that's how i feel when i write the type of poetry...but i think it will open a few sleeping minds, eventually
11 Years Ago
I'd rather be thought of as crazy than to still be asleep =D Cheers!
In this world, if you can imagine it, think it, feel it, then there is probably shreds of truth in "it", whatever it is. I liked this one...the concept was intriguing and the flow was quite nice as well. I like when people push the envelope, and you've done that nicely with this piece!
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