I dedicate this poem to all those ignorant people I left behind in my neighbor before I when to college. Every day I watched people like this, I'm talking very talented people throwing their lives away for fast money, hoes, and clothes. I go back to see them from time to time and they still have not amounted to nothing.
The image in the beginning is hilarious before reading the poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
believe me, i know what you are speaking of very well!...i thought the pic would bring a little humo.. read morebelieve me, i know what you are speaking of very well!...i thought the pic would bring a little humor to a serious subject lol
I dedicate this poem to all those ignorant people I left behind in my neighbor before I when to college. Every day I watched people like this, I'm talking very talented people throwing their lives away for fast money, hoes, and clothes. I go back to see them from time to time and they still have not amounted to nothing.
The image in the beginning is hilarious before reading the poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
believe me, i know what you are speaking of very well!...i thought the pic would bring a little humo.. read morebelieve me, i know what you are speaking of very well!...i thought the pic would bring a little humor to a serious subject lol
This poem must have been written for someone like me?< honest confession.
Love the message,the rhyming,the flow.Glad i came across this.
Hope you don't mind if i share this.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Please be my guest share it! lol...I actually wrote this to myself, i think we all need a wake up ca.. read morePlease be my guest share it! lol...I actually wrote this to myself, i think we all need a wake up call :-)
Nice. I really liked it and agreed with your poem. I feel the same way. Excellent poem i really enjoyed it, i look forward to reading more of your work. Nice job.
-SkyeBlanco
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
thanx for reading, ill be sure to return the favor :-)
This was great! Reminds me of all the people who sit playing video games all day and never see the great outdoors any more. I loved the humor and the boldness of this poem. Great Job!
When I saw the title, I was hesitant to read, but I see now what you're saying. I love this poem, and I think everyone can learn a thing or two from it. Great work!
My homeowners insurance was increased by 375$ with no good reason other than
i live in a crime plagued neighborhood. Sometimes the material chases you.
I think your saying that just belief is not enough..but ignorance is not rejection.
knowing there is God and not doing something with him is a personal slap in the face.
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...Review My Work And I Will Return The Favor!!!....THANX :-)
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