I dedicate this poem to all those ignorant people I left behind in my neighbor before I when to college. Every day I watched people like this, I'm talking very talented people throwing their lives away for fast money, hoes, and clothes. I go back to see them from time to time and they still have not amounted to nothing.
The image in the beginning is hilarious before reading the poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
believe me, i know what you are speaking of very well!...i thought the pic would bring a little humo.. read morebelieve me, i know what you are speaking of very well!...i thought the pic would bring a little humor to a serious subject lol
I like this truthful reminder.
As the old cliche says: YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU GOT UNTIL IT'S GONE.
Therefore I believe that we all must learn to appreciate what we have in health, knowledge and wisdom. And we should be able to recognizw our own talent, nurture it, and do something productive about it.
We should not let materialism be our main priority.
I really enjoyed reading this poem, it sounds really nice when read out loud. It's got a great flow that keeps the reader entranced in your words. The words used were nicely chosen. There are various noticeable literary elements in here as well. This really deserves more reviews! Great work.
A great poem, as always. Too many of us worry too much about others and what they have, neglecting our own God-given gifts. As always, you speak truth. Thanks for sharing this, a lot of people need to hear it.
Great poem, love the message in this poem. Like KAOlmsted articulated in such revered words "Get off your lazy a*s and DO something with your life!", indeed we can all take inspiration from this at some point in our lives...great write!!
What an eloquent way of saying "Get off your lazy a*s and DO something with your life!"
SR...this poem is phenomenal. You have created brilliance with this work. I am agog. I can't even articulate how much I love this poem. You've stolen my voice with your genius, sir.
All that is left for me to do now is thank you very kindly for sharing this with us today and collect my marbles and go home. You win.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
aww thanx once again for ur encouragement....and yes "Get off your lazy a*s and DO something with yo.. read moreaww thanx once again for ur encouragement....and yes "Get off your lazy a*s and DO something with your life!" shouldve been the opening line lol
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