I’m in a Daze

FreeStyle Poem

I’m in a daze
Despite the haze
I can write for days
Instead of being
Your mouse in a maze
I’m king -so sing
I want to be amazed

Crazed
By what they say
Despised
Because of what I said
Led by the sadistic
Thoughts in my head

Words unsaid
Are pointless and dead
Especially ingesting
The poison you’ve been fed

Soulless are the sinful who judge
Caused by a grudge
Because they’ve never been hugged
Lack of love
Heart used as a foot rug
Pity
I shrug

Political backfire
From a radical satire
Claiming the lives
Of the common crack buyer
We all aim higher
Some honest
Most liars
Cowards devoured
By their own lack of willpower
Smell something fishy here?
Then go take a shower
I’ll give you a few years
You’ll need much more
Than an hour

Wash your hands good enough
And you won’t have to take
The blame
Free from stains
Burned off the fingertips
Not to leave fingerprints
Don’t scream
Shame
You deserve the pain

Homeless because they raised the rent
Money was already spent
Now I’m living on this bench
With a slight stench
Preaching the gospel
Passersby are being hostel
Because I’m telling them to clean house
And I don’t have one of my own
What’s a home?
Is it where the heart is?
If it is
What if the heart is broken?
Does that mean
I live in a broken home?
I choose to be alone
Because the rest of you are clones
To the core
To the bone
Please tell me if I’m wrong…

Point made…strong

Should I mate?
Create another clay shell
For them to fill with hate?
By measuring its worth
At an unreachable rate

I refuse to compensate
For love
So I’ll wait on fate
And while I wait
I’ll sit in the shade
Away from the sun
And its unforgiving rays
This is where I’ll stay
Blazed
Deeper in my darkening daze…

Author's Note

still needs work, but i thought id share anywayz :-)

...and if it doesn't have a constant, cohesive message....that's kinda the point lol

Reviews

[MachinaWriter]

Political backfire
From a radical satire
Claiming the lives
Of the common crack buyer

An awesome poem, and that was definitely my favorite line. I definitely like where this is already and I can't wait to see what you do with it later.

[Amanda]

I really really like this. All of your writing is amazing, great job :)

[Sirius King]

thank u!!! :-))