You feel the same way as me about the people at the top. Evil muther fuckers! I gotta say though dude, I use to like Lauren hill, till I find out she's racist as f**k. That doesn't reflect your poems though. I'm working my way through them. Keep up the goodness.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
i heard that was just a rumor about Lauryn, she has some really great lyrics on these subjects... i .. read morei heard that was just a rumor about Lauryn, she has some really great lyrics on these subjects... i get a lot of inspiration from her words, so i hope its not true
I really, really enjoyed the message of this . . . I've had many days like this one. And I have to say, I couldn't agree more with the message about rich suits and their wicked ways--like when they take corporate funds to pay for world-class escort girls, which means the little people at the bottom ultimately get stuck with the bill. It's enough to make a man refuse to pay taxes. (Pity you can't get away with that one)
don't get me started on taxes, irs,and the federal reserve! that's a whole other poem lol,,,,yes mon.. read moredon't get me started on taxes, irs,and the federal reserve! that's a whole other poem lol,,,,yes money and power can easily corrupt the mind, leaving the ppl with "less than" to deal with the after math
Powerful language. This is the second poem I've read by you and I like it. Cut, strong, precise. It reads like thoughts, quick and dispersed. Once again, an evocative poem. Keep up the good work, I'll be following it with interest ^^
I'm betting on prophet
because the pain of humanity
pains you
good stuff
peace and prayers mi hermano
jbm
read Robert Lowell's poem
For the Union Dead "savage servility"
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
im not going to succumb, i just wanted to illustrate the thought process of those that do succumb , .. read moreim not going to succumb, i just wanted to illustrate the thought process of those that do succumb , thanx for the comment,,,i will give that poem a read
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