Civilized Savages
A Poem by
Sirius King
My Thoughts On The World We Live In
Cannibalistic animals
Feeding
Off of each others' pain
Blood sucking leaches
Reaching
For their own personal gain
Civilized savages
Educated fools
Empire of vampires
Rearranging the rules
Disguised in neckties
Briefcases
And smiling faces
Cloaked in lies
Spiritual wickedness
In high places
Coagulated rivers
Calculated killers
Cryptic crimes
Comprised by
Gifted minds
Concrete jungle
Play the game
"or be the game"
The weak who stumble
Are hunted down
And maimed
If you can’t beat ‘em
-join ‘em
It’s the only way
To survive
Stepping on the heads of others
Just to stay alive
Its dog eat dog
And every dog has its day
Today is mines- so be smart
When you hear the bark
…Stay the hell out of my way!
© 2013 Sirius King
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You feel the same way as me about the people at the top. Evil muther fuckers! I gotta say though dude, I use to like Lauren hill, till I find out she's racist as f**k. That doesn't reflect your poems though. I'm working my way through them. Keep up the goodness.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
i heard that was just a rumor about Lauryn, she has some really great lyrics on these subjects... i .. read more i heard that was just a rumor about Lauryn, she has some really great lyrics on these subjects... i get a lot of inspiration from her words, so i hope its not true
thanks again
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It's a great fusion of modern sayings that flow with a simple, smooth flow. i greatly enjoyed this read.
Posted 11 Years Ago
It's a great fusion of modern sayings that flow with a simple, smooth flow. i greatly enjoyed this read.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
"play the game or be the game" OMG! dude! where do you come up with this wisdom? this is perfect....you may color me deeply impressed!
Posted 11 Years Ago
"play the game or be the game" OMG! dude! where do you come up with this wisdom? this is perfect....you may color me deeply impressed!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
honestly i don't know...i scare myself sometimes with the things i write lol
thanks qui.. read more honestly i don't know...i scare myself sometimes with the things i write lol
thanks quin!
You feel the same way as me about the people at the top. Evil muther fuckers! I gotta say though dude, I use to like Lauren hill, till I find out she's racist as f**k. That doesn't reflect your poems though. I'm working my way through them. Keep up the goodness.
Posted 11 Years Ago
You feel the same way as me about the people at the top. Evil muther fuckers! I gotta say though dude, I use to like Lauren hill, till I find out she's racist as fuck. That doesn't reflect your poems though. I'm working my way through them. Keep up the goodness.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
i heard that was just a rumor about Lauryn, she has some really great lyrics on these subjects... i .. read more i heard that was just a rumor about Lauryn, she has some really great lyrics on these subjects... i get a lot of inspiration from her words, so i hope its not true
thanks again
Ha how did I miss this one....excellent rant of a poem. Love this! Are you still barking, I"ll stay out of your way.....?
Posted 11 Years Ago
Ha how did I miss this one....excellent rant of a poem. Love this! Are you still barking, I"ll stay out of your way.....?
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
im just barking on paper, for now ;-)
thanx Frieda!
I agree with this poems message good write which touches on hidden truth. Btw Lauryn Hill is my favorite female artist.
Posted 11 Years Ago
I agree with this poems message good write which touches on hidden truth. Btw Lauryn Hill is my favorite female artist.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
She's my favorite too man, thanx!
11 Years Ago
Check out 'I get out' on youtube by her
11 Years Ago
i've got the whole MTV unplugged album...its deep
Loved the Rhyme Scheme title and The Message. Also a Fan of Ms.Hill which really makes me understand the flow of this poem even better.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Loved the Rhyme Scheme title and The Message. Also a Fan of Ms.Hill which really makes me understand the flow of this poem even better.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
thanx man, im glad u like it
LOVE L.Boogie!
thanx again
i love the way you write you tackle the collusion in this world many writer's do this mind you but you do it well my friend :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
i love the way you write you tackle the collusion in this world many writer's do this mind you but you do it well my friend :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
thanx i really appreciate that!
WOW.... THIS IS SO GOOD! THE REAL LIFE OF A PERSON IN A TERRORISED COUNTRY... JUST AM LOST WITH WORDS, JUST SOOOO GOOD EN THANXX 4 SHARING.
Posted 11 Years Ago
WOW.... THIS IS SO GOOD! THE REAL LIFE OF A PERSON IN A TERRORISED COUNTRY... JUST AM LOST WITH WORDS, JUST SOOOO GOOD EN THANXX 4 SHARING.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
wow...thanx!! :-)
11 Years Ago
WO I C.one
. welcome
Every word...took me deeper into this man-made chasm of the executive order; the rich get richer and the result will be just as you predict, I believe: the "dogs" will have their day. Well done, SR.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Every word...took me deeper into this man-made chasm of the executive order; the rich get richer and the result will be just as you predict, I believe: the "dogs" will have their day. Well done, SR.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
i agree...thanx!
wonderful as always! it flows so smoothly and really makes the reader think! Every comparison you made was spot on...great job!! :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
wonderful as always! it flows so smoothly and really makes the reader think! Every comparison you made was spot on...great job!! :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
thanx for checking it out! :-)
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