Broken and battered emotionless

Being tortured by Love
is merely unbearable
the boundaries was crossed
due to my breakdown
my breathless circumstances
which held me clear confession
of corrupt
dangerous damage left me dazed
without hope
I must change as my change of heart
has became stable
I'm now in restraint
I resume my quest in vision
to have once what was
my indestructible man.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[passionberry]

Thank u so much for review

[Pamela Haddad]

That's a great piece; however, it would be better if you change was to were in the third line. Apart from that, it is a wonderfully deep poem :)

[passionberry]

Trying something a bit different starting to change thoughts within