Somebody!

A love poem!

Somebody is dear within me 

Somebody thinks for me 

Somebody dreams for me 

Somebody imagines me 

Somebody creates a world 

                        Within my heaven 

Somebody places stars 

                        In dream garden 

Somebody becomes the light 

                        In my darken night

Somebody brings the springs 

                        With his love wings 

Somebody cares me 

Somebody comforts me 

Somebody loves me 

Oh! Somebody so dear within me 

               Who is everything to me. 

                                  Somebody… 

Author's Note

Let me know if you have any suggestions.

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

Welcome to Writer's Cafe (WC). Keep writing. No suggestions here because this is all about you and the writing looks very good. You are worried about not keeping to a standard style, but as no two butterflies are alike, we know that styles will vary. Just wondering --is this a poem about your muse?

[LadyInCrimson]

Thanks a lot guys for your kind, inspiring words:)

[Lily]

Welcome to Writers Cafe!!! I like this poem, for many reasons! :) This is a wonderful and beautiful poem, that I would suggest for everyone! You should keep writing. I don't have ANY suggestions for you, it's just perfect to me, I love this. I seriously will tell everyone in my Group, and all of my Friends, they will love ALL of this! Most of my friends on here are Poets, so they will really like this, and you other works! :) Thank you so much for posting this wonderful poem! Thank you!!! :)

[Akshat♥]

Firstly,I love it!!
Secondly, Somebody within you is your soul or somebody you love:)
Flow flows good...keep writing!!

[Amila Jay]

Nice write:)