wow... ok, that was really f'n sweet. first time ive ever seen/read a poem like that lol. way cool what you did there. id added so much to the piece. as for the piece itself. very nicely penned. very sweet, filled with the feel of genuine emotion.
The graphics are awesome, and the poem quite beautiful. I must say that it was difficult to read, and it distracted from the purity of the write. Brilliant!
This is a most wonderful poem! The telling of romance, all of the passion and desire of one night. Spilling forget me nots and lovely wishes, love songs and midnight blisses. I dig it, and I haven't really seen a poem done like that on writers too! Using flash to tell the poem almost like a picture book (which I find interesting, and you pulled it off pretty well). Can't wait to read more of your poetry!
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