doubtful truth

the age of doubt

crying out loud

not knowing what it cries about

so unsure

let's try one more

pace

toward the face

forever hidden

by my hands

over my eyes

gotta see to believe

even then, it's hard to conceive

that everything you touch

isn't just

an illusion of the mind.

don't you find

that your mind

is too doubtful to trust?

i must be

crazy

to think

i have the right answer

though the evidence points there.

is it chance or

does truth exist

in a way that insists

on existing

the same to all?

 

put off the games,

let the truth be who He is.

Author's Note

honesty, please (:

Reviews

[Lydia]

Great job! I love it, amazing work.

[khalid]

honestly i have enjoyed reading this. i liked everything about it including the words picking, the musical flow and the very nice rhyme..

[Matty Bosox]

I love poetry and trying to get a good meaning on each verse...I write screen-plays and graphic novels but I love poetry....This is something I can never do...Especially a poem as complicated as this....You do a terrific job of the lack of understanding surrounding the world around us....Some want to hide from it some can't believe it, some just take it in stride.....That was what I got out of your writing....Even if I interpreted it wrong, this is very excellently worded and elagently rhymed....Terrific work Sephra