Face

I wrote this while flying down to see my boyfriend and I needed to share with him how I felt. He was my home and I was his. It was a sincere poem from the heart so I wanted to share it.

 

FACE

 

Nightly whispers

Put me at ease

After your “I love you’s”

I soon fall asleep

 

Missing your sounds

Noticed most in moon light

Cuddling in fetus style

As you embrace me at night

 

Over clouds I now ride,

To see your face

And act like we did

Those fun days when we first met.

 

You are my calm

During my moods,

Which come out like storms,

My light when I’m lost in emotions.

 

We clash like waves

And have comfortable silence when bored

At the end when it counts

For each other we are home.

Reviews

[Greg Skura]

Very nice description of the many facets of relationship! Thank You for sharing!

[A.T.B.]

The remembrance of things past sometimes brings solace. You did an excellent job conveying how the narrator misses her lover. You didn't tell, you rather showed us. I tried to tackle the same theme in THE PASSING ANGEL. I liked how your poem flowed. Your use of punctuation is not consistent throughout the poem. Sometimes you use it, some other times you don't. I enjoyed reading your poem. Brilliantly written. Bravo.

[Jeff "jazzman"..]

Beatiful poetic verse...I really enjoyed this piece....Great work!

[B.creative]

You are my calm
During my moods

hmm...I might have to borrow that line some time. (smile)

Nice poem, it screams out virtue for me.