Vertigo, Phantom Paranoia, and Contagioness are villains by day and superheros by night. Updated every saturday and this is written by both me and my friend, Randi.
Any review is a great review!
First three chapters are pretty much just introductory so you know their powers and whatnot and the fourth chapter starts the plot. Each chapter so far has been about 1000-1500 words and will probably remain that short unless absolutely necessary. I write for Vertigo, Randi writes for Phantom Paranoia, and we both write for Contagioness. Happy reading! :)
My Review
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This is a truly captivating story. You really get an insight into the characters thoughts and feelings. It keeps you interested. I recently read a series that started out good and then moved so slow I lost interest. I have a feeling S.H.O.V.E.L will not let me down. Vivian is a very amazing and talented writer, especially for being so young. It's no surprise that I love this book just three chapters in. I will definitely be finishing this one!
Hey, my name is Randi, I'm the co-author of S.H.O.V.E.L. so check out my work sometime if you liked it, or even if you didn't. I write various stories and poems that should delight all who read them. Vivian was here! (She wrote all of that)
Overall, I must say S.H.O.V.E.L. is a fairly interesting read. There are things to improve upon, however, there are some brilliant things happening here. The imagery, for one, is excellent. There's enough to give me, the reader, a good idea where I'm being transported to, but not so much that my mind isn't allowed to do what it does best: imagine. Second, I enjoy the characters themselves. While the over-all plots and characters at this point and time seem goofy, I feel like these characters are real. I’ll message you about some things to improve upon, since you asked. Otherwise, this concludes my review. I hope this story sees completion, as it deserves such.
Cheers,
Blaine Blade
This is a truly captivating story. You really get an insight into the characters thoughts and feelings. It keeps you interested. I recently read a series that started out good and then moved so slow I lost interest. I have a feeling S.H.O.V.E.L will not let me down. Vivian is a very amazing and talented writer, especially for being so young. It's no surprise that I love this book just three chapters in. I will definitely be finishing this one!
Hi I'm Vivian Wallace and I'm 17 :) My friend Randi and I plan on becoming published authors, so we are working on our skills and just having fun by writing a silly super hero story together (S.H.O.V... more..