Palpitating The Seductive Sheath~

Is it in the chiffon glaze of my dielectric pumps

the way the blades of glial grass weave helpless dew

against my calves in love’s painful striations

that move you

groove you

to frame my mahogany veil with the largest hands

I’ve ever seen

 

Is it the clouds, that wear my myelin dreams in a mushroom cap

the way they reflect a field of rippling poses

in hip pressure, against the flank of a moving army of ghosts

looking for a tesseract girl

who can leap tall theoretical orders

in a single tetrahedronic dip

toward hyperprismatic

love

 

Or, is it my latex glissande into a simple room

the way simplicity slithers from my wet gaze

how pearl beads in my hairline come alive

at attention

under fingertips in PhD’s , admiring

the weaving

in my celestial antiquity

 

 

 

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Reviews

[asdarkeyesclose]

'Or, is it my latex glissande into a simple room

the way simplicity slithers from my wet gaze

how pearl beads in my hairline come alive

at attention

under fingertips in PhD’s , admiring

the weaving

in my celestial antiquity'

unbelievable voice and flow, the images sophisticated and unforgettable, edgy and artistic. this is surrealism at its best with unexpected associations that turn language upside down and inside out. my favourite image: 'the way the blades of glial grass weave helpless dew'.

[Loki Ragna-rock]

seriously, put down the thesaurus

[Muse]

lol....they don't understand? It's such a sin....that some people call themselves a writer...yet they lack any and all imagination.

Or, is it my latex glissande into a simple room
the way simplicity slithers from my wet gaze
how pearl beads in my hairline come alive
at attention
under fingertips in PhD’s , admiring
the weaving
in my celestial antiquity

Pure naughtiness! I luved it like always. 100/100

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

@Wessik apparently you're the only one~ so that must mean you have the imaginative capacity of a squished dung beetle~ and if you had no critique to offer since your comprehension levels don't include the surreal why bother being an a**hole~ BLOCk =)~

[Wessik]

I'm afraid I don't understand it.

[Linear]

I write simple verse you write with intricacies of sheer nylon delight.
You weave and tease blending in your colour schemes.
With blossoming beads of dripping ambrosia, you yes you dissected the palpitating heart and sheath.....

:O). Oh what joy

[Demi Rose]

a potent read.

[.]

You have the magical touch of a seductress as you lay down verse like a velvet eiderdown for all the mere mortal to wrap themselves to keep warm in the beauty of the words..this is so delicately delivered, subtle and exquisite beyond anything I have read in a while.

[Tenebrousoul]

Wow. So seductive. The imagery is so powerful, the sensations, wow.... I have a new favorite!

[shultzfeather]

smooth shiftings
I think the dielectric pumps are really full of electrifying

[RainQueen]

Always, always...Layers to dive into - to luxuriate in...It's a gentle tease, just the faintest frisson of challenge, buried deep. It IS the Glial grass, your myelin dreams, but all of that pales in comparison to the light under the brilliant words.

The handiwork of a brilliant mind, a formidable gift...and a shining soul. ~Unforgettable~